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JoeBobMack 🚫

I'm learning -- maybe, it's all very confusing (but fun) -- where I fall on the Pantser-Plotter continuum. I'm reading Writing into the Dark by Dean Wesley Smith and found this passage:

And as I said, I wrote a lot of media tie-in books from outlines. My rule during those days was to write the outline, get it approved by Paramount or some other license holder, then never look at the outline and just write the book. My memory is so bad that after seven to ten months from the time I wrote the outline to the time I got the contract and wrote the book, I had no memory of the book I had outlined at all. None. And if the title hadn't been on the contract, I wouldn't have remembered that either. So I never looked at the outline. Never. I just typed in the title and wrote off into the dark. That kept the book fresh and alive for me. And no editor or license holder ever noticed the book was different from the outline they approved. Not once.

Funny. And, perhaps, indicative of how much of what happens in publishing houses is "because that's how we do it" rather than "because that's what works."

Replies:   Paladin_HGWT
Paladin_HGWT 🚫
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@JoeBobMack

Well... Dean Wesley Smith mentioned, twice, that he has poor memory... So, perhaps "They" told him multiple times about how much what he had written completely diverged from his outline. Since they deemed the book saleable, and according to the first line he wrote a lot of books with "tie-ins" there is, or was, a market for what he wrote; "They" just proofread and edited what he wrote. Understanding he wouldn't remember what they told him either.

Unreliable Narrator!

There are a lot of practical techniques to "proper" shooting. I mention several key techniques as part of my range briefings or other classes I teach about shooting. The only matters I demand strict compliance of are Safety measures! If a soldier, or other person I am instructing is hitting the target reliably, in particular if they are consistently inside the "8 Ring" (or equivalent), I don't bother them.

If they are missing the target, or are not grouping their shots, or are having other issues, then I work with them on their breathing, or trigger control, use of the sling, etc. Until we improve their shooting. How much, and what kind of instruction, is dependent upon numerous factors. If I am conducting training for annual qualification, and a soldier is only motivated to get by, I provide just enough instruction for them to qualify, because they are unlikely to retain most of what I offer to teach them. If a soldier wants to improve, hoping to compete, or whatever; then I work with them to learn the proper techniques and develop muscle memory and make them habits.

If a writer "can't" or Won't practice proper techniques, it is a waste of time to work with a person who ignores you or "Forgets" what you may try to teach them.

Some people can just "throw" ingredients together and make Food; others only make a Mess! Some people have to Follow the Recipe, exactly, others can use it as a guide, and a few just improvise. Knowing where you are on the spectrum of strict adherence to techniques, or "Shoot from the Hip" no matter if it's Cooking, Shooting, or Writing.

Replies:   Dominions Son
Dominions Son 🚫

@Paladin_HGWT

Some people can just "throw" ingredients together and make Food; others only make a Mess! Some people have to Follow the Recipe, exactly, others can use it as a guide, and a few just improvise.

Some keep it simple. Meat + fire = dinner. :)

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