Hi All,
I just posted the latest installment of my BROKEN VOWS series, Story 6, from the wife Sarah's perspective. The stories have been getting longer; the latest one is about 35k words. I hope you all enjoy it.
As I have mentioned previously, I am fairly new to writing and I am looking for feedback to improve my work. This story has been complicated with the flashbacks and time changes but I have really enjoyed writing it.
I am curious what people who have been reading it think about the pacing. We have just seen Sarah start to do things with other people and next it will be Nick. I tried doing my first poll here to see what people think and if I am moving too fast/too slow, etc. Please feel free to give me your feedback or message me.
https://storiesonline.net/author/polls.php?cmd=new&id=6808
Thanks for all the encouragement, suggestions and advice people have given me!