Hey everyone,
I’ve just posted updated versions of both Eli and Home For The Weekend for early feedback.
These aren’t the final polished editions yet. I’m putting them up on here first so I can hear from readers who already know the stories (and new ones too). If something feels off, falls flat, or hits harder than expected, I want to know. Is the title Eli throwing you off even tho the story is about Ellie or do you get why I chose that?
HFTW received a really big update, reread it again even if you read it before, you will notice the difference.
I’d really appreciate any comments, thoughts, or even just a note saying you read it. Honest feedback helps me a lot at this stage.
Thanks for reading and for being patient while I keep working on these.
More soon.
- Lila