Available Light has been uploaded for a re-post. The story is now seven chapters where it was eight.
The old chapter one was a man alone in a hotel room for two thousand words before anything happened. The numbers said what I already suspected: a lot of you stopped there. That material is now the opening of chapter one rather than the whole of it, and Sofia arrives while you are still in the first chapter instead of most of the way through the second.
There is also a new scene in the party chapter. Evan does something with his camera that he should not, and then has to tell her about it. It costs him something, which is what the middle of the book was missing.
The ending is unchanged, down to the last line.
Chapter eight is now an afterword about the Available Light Cycle, and about the two people Evan walked past that weekend without ever knowing they were in the building. One of them gets the next book.
If you had a chapter bookmarked, everything from the old chapter three onward has moved down by one. Sorry about that. There was no way to do this without it.
The ebook edition on ZBookStore carries the same text.
Scores and comments are the fuel. Thank you for reading.
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