The ebook has had a revision pass, mostly the dialogue in the later chapters. The story is the same. Same chapters, same ending. What changed is that a few characters stopped being quite so good at talking. Everyone in that book landed every line, which is not how people speak, so some of them now miss.
The updated file is on ZBookStore.
Nothing for you to do about it if you read here. When I revise a chapter I replace the posted version, so what is on StoriesOnline is always the current text.
Available Light is up too, all eight chapters, complete. A standalone novella about a wedding photographer who can read any room and cannot stand being seen in one, and the woman in the third row who notices. It is shorter than The Long Way Back and the voice is looser. I want to know what you make of that one, and I would rather have the honest reaction than the kind one.
The other thing.
I read the comments. All of them, including the one-liners, including the ones that are mostly a score with a sentence attached. Some of them have changed the actual work. In the next book the money is handled differently, because someone here pointed out that it moved too quietly in this one. I would not have seen that on my own.
Thank you for that. And for the rest of it.
Star Again