So, my dear readers. As you remember, in the first part—after finishing the opening of the story—we stopped at the moment where I gave Grok AI and Alisa AI the same prompt:
“How does the story continue, taking into account the heroine’s growing arousal?”
Since ChatGPT quietly stepped out of the game, we are now left with a comparison between Russian and American neural networks. Well… I think this might turn out to be even more entertaining.
So, here’s what my test subjects came up with:
Grok AI:
"Dariana let the first verse roll out of her like smoke, low and rough, her voice wrapping around the heavy riff. The crowd was already losing it — bodies surging forward, hands in the air, eyes locked on her like she was the only thing in the room. She moved with the music, hips rolling slow and deliberate, one gloved hand sliding down the front of her corset as she sang.
Every step in those sharp-heeled boots sent a fresh jolt through her. The thick bass line wasn’t just sound anymore — it was a physical pulse traveling straight up the stage floor, through the thin leather soles, and into her thighs. It settled low between her legs, vibrating right against the tiny string panties that barely covered her slit. The delicate fabric was already damp, clinging to her, and each heavy kick-drum beat made it rub a little harder, a little more insistently.
She arched her back during the pre-chorus, thrusting her chest toward the screaming crowd. The tight corset squeezed her full breasts, the structured leather pressing firmly against her nipples, now stiff and aching. A sharp spark of pleasure shot straight down her spine. She bit her full crimson lower lip to keep from moaning into the mic, but her brown eyes had gone darker, heavier.
By the time the chorus hit, her body was betraying her completely.
She dropped into a low crouch, thighs parting just enough for the fishnet mesh to stretch wide across her pale skin. The tiny leather shorts rode up even higher, the hem digging into the soft underside of her ass. The thin strip of her panties had slipped between her folds now, the soaked fabric gliding over her swollen clit with every subtle grind of her hips against the rhythm. Heat pooled low in her belly, thick and liquid. She could feel herself getting wetter, the slickness starting to coat the inside of her thighs beneath the fishnets.
Fuck… not yet, she thought, but the thought only made it worse.
She rose slowly, turning sideways to the audience, and ran her gloved hand down her corseted waist, over the curve of her hip, then back up. The crowd roared louder. She could feel hundreds of eyes devouring her — tracing the deep cleavage spilling over the top of the corset, the long black hair whipping across her bare shoulders, the way the fishnets framed every inch of her legs. The knowledge that they were watching her like this, while she was secretly throbbing and soaked, sent another hot wave through her core.
Her voice cracked on the high note — not from strain, but from the sudden, sharp pulse between her legs. She gripped the mic stand tighter, knuckles whitening inside the leather glove, and rolled her hips once more, harder this time. The movement pressed the tiny panties even tighter against her clit. A soft, involuntary whimper slipped into the microphone, disguised as part of the melody, but she felt it all the way down to her toes.
Sweat was already glistening on her pale skin. A single drop traced down between her breasts, disappearing into the tight valley the corset had created. Her breathing had grown shallower, each inhale pushing her chest harder against the leather.
The song built toward its final explosive chorus. Dariana threw her head back, long black hair flying, and belted the last lines with raw, sexual power. Her entire body trembled — not just from the performance, but from the orgasm that was now dangerously close, hovering right there on the edge, teased by every vibration, every movement, every filthy stare from the crowd.
When the last chord crashed and faded, the club erupted in a wall of sound.
Dariana stood panting under the lights, chest heaving, lips parted and glossy. Her brown eyes were glazed with lust. She could feel how wet she was — the tiny string panties completely soaked, the leather shorts damp where they pressed against her. Her nipples were so hard they ached against the corset with every heartbeat.
She gave the crowd a slow, wicked smile, licking her lower lip like she’d just tasted something delicious.
The next song was already starting.
And she wasn’t sure she could make it through the set without coming undone right there on stage — in front of nearly a thousand people — while the music kept fucking her deeper and deeper with every beat." (4260 symbol)
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Alisa AI
The music pulsed through her veins, a living thing that demanded surrender. Dariana moved with the rhythm, each step in her sharp‑heeled boots sending a jolt of sensation up her legs. The bass vibrated through the stage floor, syncing with the quickening beat of her heart, while the lights flashed in time with her breaths — shallow, deliberate, growing more uneven by the second.
She leaned into the microphone, her voice dripping with seduction as she sang the next verse. Her hips rolled with a mind of their own, the tiny leather shorts riding up just a fraction higher with every movement. The fishnet mesh stretched across her thighs, teasing her skin with its coarse texture — a constant, delicious friction that mirrored the heat coiling low in her belly.
A particularly heavy drumbeat made her shiver. She arched her back, thrusting her chest toward the crowd, and felt the tight corset press against her nipples — hardened now, sensitive to every brush of the leather. The sensation sent a sharp spark straight between her legs, making her bite her lower lip to stifle a moan.
Out of the corner of her eye, she caught a glimpse of a man in the front row — dark hair, intense gaze locked on her. He wasn’t just watching; he was feeling her performance, his breath matching her rhythm. Their eyes met for a heartbeat, and something primal stirred inside her. The connection was electric, wordless, and it sent another wave of heat through her body.
She broke the gaze, turning her head to whip her hair around dramatically. The movement made her gloves slide against her arms, the leather cool against her heated skin — another layer of sensation to add to the growing storm inside her. She gripped the microphone stand tighter, using it for balance as her hips moved faster, more insistently, chasing something she couldn’t quite name.
The song built toward its chorus, the music swelling, the crowd roaring louder. Dariana closed her eyes for a moment, letting the sound wash over her. She could feel every inch of her body now — the way the choker hugged her throat, the way the boots lengthened her stride, the way the thin strip of fabric between her thighs grew damp with her arousal.
As the chorus hit, she threw her head back and let out a low, throaty laugh that somehow made its way into her singing. Her voice took on a new quality — rawer, deeper, more vulnerable. The audience responded with a collective gasp, then a thunderous cheer.
«Yes,» she thought, feeling the power of it all — the music, the crowd, the heat, the need. «This is what it’s about.»
She opened her eyes again, scanning the sea of faces. The dark‑haired man was still there, watching. This time, she held his gaze. A slow, knowing smile curved her lips. She swayed her hips in a deliberate, hypnotic rhythm, letting him see — and feel — every shift of her body.
The next song began, even heavier, even more primal. Dariana gripped the mic, her breath coming faster. The line between performance and pleasure was blurring, and she welcomed it. Every beat of the drums, every flash of the lights, every hungry stare from the crowd fed the fire inside her.
«Just the beginning,» she murmured against the microphone, her voice barely audible over the music but carrying an unmistakable promise. «Just the beginning.»
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I honestly don’t know who did better here. If we go purely by length, then Grok wins—his version was almost a thousand characters longer. But Alisa’s version wasn’t any worse, in my opinion.
Since both of them decided to include the performance aspect, I went over to my friend’s page and borrowed one of her song lyrics, figuring it would fit perfectly as an intro. Then I asked my two test subjects to rewrite the scene, this time incorporating the song and its influence on the heroine.
So the prompt became something like this:
“Alright. She starts singing. Even though the song itself isn’t really about love, in her imagination the protagonist of the song takes control of her, and in reality she continues to grow more aroused.
What kind of associations could this song create in her mind from a sensual perspective?”
(Song https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y05RISM1KKA&list=RDY05RISM1KKA&start_radio=1
Text:
How many lifes I have lived...
And I dont't believe you.
I am immortal. It's the gift.
And I know it's true...
know it's true..
know it's true..
Why should I run away
From your lies? I won't play!
My tears of sorrow are everywhere
And I can't stop it!
Sometimes I think someone's there.
But I can't prove it...
No, I can't prove it...
It can't be real!
Why should I run away
From your lies? I won't play!
Why should I to run away
From your lies? I won't play!
Are you screaming when you feel the pain?
You will die! You must pay!)
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So, these are the versions the AIs came up with.
Grok AI:
"Dariana gripped the microphone tighter as the band dropped into the song’s heavy, brooding intro. The opening riff rolled through the club like distant thunder, and she let her head fall back, long black hair cascading down her spine. Her full crimson lips parted, and her voice poured out — low, smoky, almost hypnotic.
“How many lives I have lived…
And I don’t believe you…”
In her mind, the lyrics instantly twisted into something far more dangerous than the song had ever meant.
She saw him — the immortal protagonist, dark and commanding, the one who had lived a thousand lives and now claimed this one. He wasn’t a lover. He was a force. In her fantasy he stepped out of the shadows behind her on stage, invisible to the thousand eyes watching, but very, very real to her body.
As she sang the next line, she felt his hands slide around her corseted waist from behind, fingers digging into the leather, pulling her back against an invisible chest.
“I am immortal. It’s the gift…
And I know it’s true… know it’s true… know it’s true…”
The bass line throbbed straight up through the floor and into her core. In her imagination the immortal tightened his grip, one hand sliding down over the tiny leather shorts, pressing the thin string of her panties harder against her swollen, slick folds. She was already soaked — the delicate fabric clung wetly to her, every tiny shift of her hips making it rub against her aching clit.
She arched her back harder, thrusting her breasts forward for the crowd, but in her mind it was him forcing the movement, making her display herself while he toyed with her.
“Why should I run away from your lies? I won’t play!”
Her voice cracked with raw power on the word “play.” She felt his breath on her neck, teeth grazing the spiked choker as he whispered that she didn’t get to run anymore. Not tonight. Not while she was dressed like this, legs spread in those fishnets, ass barely covered, nipples stiff and aching against the tight leather corset.
“My tears of sorrow are everywhere…
And I can’t stop it!”
A fresh rush of heat flooded between her thighs. In her fantasy he pushed two fingers under the edge of the tiny shorts, slipping beneath the soaked string panties and stroking her slowly, deliberately, while she tried to keep singing. Real tears of overwhelming pleasure pricked at the corners of her eyes — not sorrow, but helpless, delicious surrender. She could feel herself dripping down the inside of the fishnets, the large mesh letting the cool air tease her overheated skin.
“Sometimes I think someone’s there…
But I can’t prove it… No, I can’t prove it… It can’t be real!”
Her voice dropped to a husky growl. The invisible immortal behind her pressed his hard cock against the curve of her ass through the shorts, grinding slowly in time with the riff. She could almost feel the thick length of him sliding between her cheeks, teasing her, owning her in front of everyone while no one could see. The thought made her knees weaken for a split second.
The crowd screamed louder, thinking it was just raw rock energy. They had no idea she was seconds away from soaking through the leather.
“Why should I run away from your lies? I won’t play!”
She dropped to her knees on the stage during the bridge, thighs spread, back arched dramatically. The position pressed the tiny string panties even tighter against her throbbing clit. In her mind he followed her down, pinning her there, fingers thrusting deeper while she sang the next lines straight into the mic, voice trembling with barely contained lust.
“Are you screaming when you feel the pain?
You will die! You must pay!”
The final lines hit like lightning. In her fantasy the immortal drove into her hard, filling her completely, forcing her to take every inch while the whole club watched. The mix of imagined pain and pleasure was so intense that her real body shuddered. Her nipples were painfully tight against the corset, her pussy clenching rhythmically around nothing, desperate and dripping.
She rose slowly, hair whipping, eyes half-lidded and dark with lust as she screamed the last “You must pay!” into the microphone.
The crowd lost their minds.
But inside Dariana’s head, the immortal hadn’t finished with her.
He was only getting started.
And she still had an entire set to survive."
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Alisa AI:
"Her voice poured out, low and powerful, as she began to move. The first lines — «How many lives I have lived…» — resonated deep within her, sparking a primal sense of freedom. I am immortal, she thought, in this moment, under these lights. I can be anything. I can feel anything.
As she sang «I am immortal. It’s the gift», a thrill shot through her — not just of power, but of seduction. The words wrapped around her like a lover’s whisper, promising invincibility and permission. Yes, I am untouchable. I can surrender completely, and nothing will harm me. Her hips swayed with more confidence, her movements becoming more fluid, more hypnotic.
«And I don’t believe you» — she sang, her voice dripping with defiance. In her mind, the «you» wasn’t just a vague antagonist. It was him — the shadowy figure she’d glimpsed in the back of the club. I don’t believe your lies, she thought, but I want to feel your hands on me, proving me wrong.
When she reached «Why should I run away / From your lies? I won’t play!», the lyrics became her own mantra. It wasn’t just about rejecting deceit — it was about embracing desire without shame. Why should I hide what I want? Why should I pretend I’m not burning up inside? She arched her back slightly, pushing her chest forward, feeling the tight corset against her nipples, the way it lifted and framed her breasts.
«My tears of sorrow are everywhere / And I can’t stop it!» — the words sent a shiver down her spine. But in her fantasy, those tears weren’t of pain. They were tears of overwhelming sensation — the kind that come when you’re pushed to the edge of pleasure. Sometimes I think someone’s there… — yes, he was there. Watching. Wanting. His gaze was a physical touch, sliding over her skin, tracing the lines of her fishnets, lingering on the bare skin above her boots.
She sang «But I can’t prove it…» with a breathy laugh, half in the song, half in her mind. No, I can’t prove he’s really there — but I can feel him. I can feel his desire like a current in the air. The bass vibrated through the stage floor, syncing with the pulse between her thighs.
The chorus hit, and with it came a surge of raw energy. «You will die! You must pay!» — in her imagination, the threat transformed into a seductive promise. You’ll pay… with your surrender, she thought. With the way you’ll tremble when I touch you. With the way you’ll beg for more. Her breath quickened, a hot flush spreading across her skin.
She moved with the music, her long black hair whipping around her shoulders. With every step in those heeled boots, she felt the tiny leather shorts ride up just a fraction higher, the fishnets stretching across her thighs. The thin strip of fabric between her legs — her string panties — shifted with every movement, sending sparks of sensation through her core.
As she repeated «Why should I run away…» for the final time, her voice dropped to a low, smoky murmur. Her eyes half‑lidded, she locked gazes with the shadowy figure again. I won’t run, she thought. I’ll come to you. I’ll make you pay — with every breath, every touch, every moan.
The music pulsed around her, inside her. She wasn’t just singing a song anymore — she was living it. The protagonist’s defiance was hers. The immortal gift was the freedom to feel everything, to want everything, to take everything. Her body was fully awake now, alive with a hunger that matched the song’s defiance.
The night was far from over, and Dariana knew she was just getting started."
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Honestly, I don’t know who did it better. I kind of like both versions, but in the end, it’s not really up to me—it’s up to you, the readers, to decide.
As for me… I kept pushing this little fantasy further, fully aware that if Dasha ever sees this, I’ll at least get my ears chewed off for it 😅.
And even knowing that, I kept going, refining prompts and feeding new ideas into the models:
“After finishing the song, Dariana leaned down and grabbed a bottle of water to wet her throat. Meanwhile, the band had already started playing the next track, and she had to grip the microphone tighter—so tight her knuckles turned white…”
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Grok Ai
"Dariana finished the last screaming note of the first song and the crowd detonated. She staggered back half a step, chest heaving, skin already glistening with sweat under the hot lights. Her full crimson lips parted as she leaned down quickly, snatching the bottle of water from the stage floor. She tilted her head back and drank fast, cool liquid spilling down her throat and a few stray drops sliding between her breasts into the tight leather corset. The cold shock against her overheated skin only made her nipples tighten harder against the unyielding leather.
The band didn’t wait. They slammed straight into the next track — a darker, heavier riff that pulsed like a migraine and a heartbeat at the same time.
Dariana barely had time to drop the bottle. She gripped the microphone stand with both gloved hands, so tight her knuckles turned white beneath the black leather. Oh god, not yet… I’m already soaked, she thought, panic and dark thrill twisting together in her belly. The tiny string panties were completely drenched, the thin strip of fabric clinging obscenely to her swollen, aching folds. Every tiny shift of her hips made the soaked mesh of the fishnets rub against her inner thighs like a teasing tongue.
She planted her heeled boots wider apart, trying to steady herself, but the movement only pressed the leather shorts tighter against her pussy. She could feel her own wetness leaking out, slowly soaking the front of the shorts.
And then she sang.
“Every day I hear some voices in my head…
They always haunt me. I’m mad…”
In her mind the immortal from the first song was still right behind her — but now the voices had multiplied. They were his voices, dark and commanding, whispering filthy things straight into her skull while the entire club watched her perform, completely unaware.
You’re mine now, they growled. Look at you, dripping on stage like a desperate little whore while you pretend to sing.
She rolled her hips hard into the next line, the tiny leather shorts riding even higher, the soaked string panties rubbing mercilessly against her swollen clit with every movement.
“I see this world through the prism of black and white…
There is no room for shades of gray…”
In her fantasy he grabbed her by the throat from behind, spiked choker digging into her skin as his other hand shoved roughly under the front of her shorts. Two thick fingers slid straight under the thin strip of fabric and pushed deep inside her without warning. She was dripping — hot, slick, and clenching around the imagined intrusion. Fuck… deeper, she thought desperately, her real thighs trembling. The fantasy felt so vivid she could almost hear the wet sound of his fingers fucking her in time with the brutal drumbeat.
“I lost my mind. Hysteria…
And my life is a kind of schizophrenia…”
Her voice cracked on “hysteria,” turning the word into something broken and filthy. The tight corset squeezed her ribs with every ragged breath, her nipples so hard they ached painfully against the leather. I’m going to come right here, she thought, a wave of shameful heat flooding her face. In front of all of them. While they think I’m just performing.
“I want to take a knife and then to cut your throat…
I am not your wife anymore!”
She dropped into a low crouch during the line, thighs spread wide, back arched so the crowd could see the full curve of her ass barely covered by the shorts. The position pressed the heel of her palm against the mic stand right between her legs. The cold metal kissed the soaked leather over her pussy and she had to bite her full lower lip to keep from moaning out loud. In her head the immortal was now fucking her with three fingers, hard and fast, his thumb circling her clit while he growled in her ear that she belonged to the voices now — that she was going to lose control and come on stage like the filthy rock slut she really was.
“I look in the mirror and I see your face…
Now I feel a fever and your nasty grace…”
The fever was real. Her skin burned. Fresh wetness slid down the inside of her fishnet-covered thighs, the large mesh letting the cool air tease her overheated, dripping pussy. Everyone can see how hard my nipples are, she thought frantically. They have no idea I’m fingering myself in my own mind while I sing this.
“I lost my mind. Hysteria…
And my life is a kind of schizophrenia…”
She rose slowly, hair whipping across her face, eyes half-lidded and glassy with lust. Her hips rolled shamelessly now, grinding against the mic stand with every beat. In her fantasy the immortal yanked her shorts aside, replaced his fingers with the thick, hot head of his cock, and slammed into her in one brutal thrust. She could feel every imagined inch stretching her open, filling her completely while the whole club screamed her name.
“I’m flying to the light like a night-fly…
The end is near, and I’m ready to die…”
Her voice trembled on the high note, raw and desperate. The orgasm was right there — coiling tight and vicious in her belly, threatening to rip through her any second. Don’t come… don’t you fucking dare come yet, she begged herself, but her body wasn’t listening. Her pussy clenched rhythmically around nothing, dripping, aching, desperate.
She screamed the final chorus, head thrown back, long black hair flying, body shaking with the effort of holding back the orgasm that was now dangerously, shamefully close.
“I already lost my mind. Hysteria…
And my life is over in this schizophrenia!”
The last chord crashed and the crowd exploded again.
Dariana stood there panting, thighs trembling violently, the thin string of her panties completely drenched and clinging obscenely to her pulsing, swollen slit. Her brown eyes were dark, pupils blown wide with raw, uncontrollable lust.
She wasn’t just aroused anymore.
She was ruined.
And there were still three more songs left in the set."
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Alisa AI:
"Dariana finished the last screaming note of the first song and the crowd detonated. She staggered back half a step, chest heaving, skin already glistening with sweat under the hot lights. Her full crimson lips parted as she leaned down quickly, snatching the bottle of water from the stage floor. She tilted her head back and drank fast, cool liquid spilling down her throat and a few stray drops sliding between her breasts into the tight leather corset. The cold shock against her overheated skin only made her nipples tighten harder against the unyielding leather.
The band didn’t wait. They slammed straight into the next track — a darker, heavier riff that pulsed like a migraine and a heartbeat at the same time.
Dariana barely had time to drop the bottle. She gripped the microphone stand with both gloved hands, so tight her knuckles turned white beneath the black leather. Oh god, not yet… I’m already soaked, she thought, panic and dark thrill twisting together in her belly. The tiny string panties were completely drenched, the thin strip of fabric clinging obscenely to her swollen, aching folds. Every tiny shift of her hips made the soaked mesh of the fishnets rub against her inner thighs like a teasing tongue.
She planted her heeled boots wider apart, trying to steady herself, but the movement only pressed the leather shorts tighter against her pussy. She could feel her own wetness leaking out, slowly soaking the front of the shorts.
And then she sang.
“Every day I hear some voices in my head…
They always haunt me. I’m mad…”
In her mind the immortal from the first song was still right behind her — but now the voices had multiplied. They were his voices, dark and commanding, whispering filthy things straight into her skull while the entire club watched her perform, completely unaware.
You’re mine now, they growled. Look at you, dripping on stage like a desperate little whore while you pretend to sing.
She rolled her hips hard into the next line, the tiny leather shorts riding even higher, the soaked string panties rubbing mercilessly against her swollen clit with every movement.
“I see this world through the prism of black and white…
There is no room for shades of gray…”
In her fantasy he grabbed her by the throat from behind, spiked choker digging into her skin as his other hand shoved roughly under the front of her shorts. Two thick fingers slid straight under the thin strip of fabric and pushed deep inside her without warning. She was dripping — hot, slick, and clenching around the imagined intrusion. Fuck… deeper, she thought desperately, her real thighs trembling. The fantasy felt so vivid she could almost hear the wet sound of his fingers fucking her in time with the brutal drumbeat.
“I lost my mind. Hysteria…
And my life is a kind of schizophrenia…”
Her voice cracked on “hysteria,” turning the word into something broken and filthy. The tight corset squeezed her ribs with every ragged breath, her nipples so hard they ached painfully against the leather. I’m going to come right here, she thought, a wave of shameful heat flooding her face. In front of all of them. While they think I’m just performing.
“I want to take a knife and then to cut your throat…
I am not your wife anymore!”
She dropped into a low crouch during the line, thighs spread wide, back arched so the crowd could see the full curve of her ass barely covered by the shorts. The position pressed the heel of her palm against the mic stand right between her legs. The cold metal kissed the soaked leather over her pussy and she had to bite her full lower lip to keep from moaning out loud. In her head the immortal was now fucking her with three fingers, hard and fast, his thumb circling her clit while he growled in her ear that she belonged to the voices now — that she was going to lose control and come on stage like the filthy rock slut she really was.
“I look in the mirror and I see your face…
Now I feel a fever and your nasty grace…”
The fever was real. Her skin burned. Fresh wetness slid down the inside of her fishnet-covered thighs, the large mesh letting the cool air tease her overheated, dripping pussy. Everyone can see how hard my nipples are, she thought frantically. They have no idea I’m fingering myself in my own mind while I sing this.
“I lost my mind. Hysteria…
And my life is a kind of schizophrenia…”
She rose slowly, hair whipping across her face, eyes half-lidded and glassy with lust. Her hips rolled shamelessly now, grinding against the mic stand with every beat. In her fantasy the immortal yanked her shorts aside, replaced his fingers with the thick, hot head of his cock, and slammed into her in one brutal thrust. She could feel every imagined inch stretching her open, filling her completely while the whole club screamed her name.
“I’m flying to the light like a night-fly…
The end is near, and I’m ready to die…”
Her voice trembled on the high note, raw and desperate. The orgasm was right there — coiling tight and vicious in her belly, threatening to rip through her any second. Don’t come… don’t you fucking dare come yet, she begged herself, but her body wasn’t listening. Her pussy clenched rhythmically around nothing, dripping, aching, desperate.
She screamed the final chorus, head thrown back, long black hair flying, body shaking with the effort of holding back the orgasm that was now dangerously, shamefully close.
“I already lost my mind. Hysteria…
And my life is over in this schizophrenia!”
The last chord crashed and the crowd exploded again.
Dariana stood there panting, thighs trembling violently, the thin string of her panties completely drenched and clinging obscenely to her pulsing, swollen slit. Her brown eyes were dark, pupils blown wide with raw, uncontrollable lust.
She wasn’t just aroused anymore.
She was ruined.
And there were still three more songs left in the set.
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And I think this is a good place to stop—for now. This post has already turned out quite massive.
So let me ask you: how interesting is this blog for you so far? And what about the story itself?
The continuation will come in the next part…