Hey folks. I’ve rewritten the first chapter of Ethan’s Nieces and cleaned up some of the story errors people have been nice enough to point out.
Once again, feedback is super helpful, I’m hoping to improve my ability as a writer and this story in particular is something of a playground premise for me to bounce ideas around with.
For now I’ve been trying to post a chapter a day, and the current rough draft has 13 chapters total. My hope is to have the completed story up by the second week of December.