Chapter 5 of PBB is now posted! Although I revised chapters 1-4 fairly heavily, chapter 5 is the first new content of this story since 2010!!
I really like how this story is coming along. I like the 2025 versions of Jim, Beth, and Aimee more than the 2006 versions. The story is deeper, more mature, something I’m proud of.
A logistical note. Most of the story is from Jim’s point of view. But sometimes we get Beth’s POV, and that’s in italics.
No sections of Aimee’s POV, at least not yet. Might integrate something later. But in this modern revision, I think this is more a story about Beth and Jim than I originally envisioned.
Please share your thoughts on this story with me. More chapters coming soon!!