So as I was looking through my story to edit it to repost, I realized that there was at least three entire paragraphs that somehow got deleted before I could post it to here. Please note that I am doing major edits that will add several pages to each chaptes, and I will make sure to add those missing parts back in. I hope that you all will take the time to re-read those parts at least and that everything will be vastly improved. To those that read it before the edits, and were disappointed, I do apologize and I hope that you will give the story another chance.