Hello readers,
Off the top, I'd like to thank everyone for the strong support for the return of The Girl at the Motel Pool. It was nice to see a story succeed again and the review scores have slowly been going up on it, which is also nice.
I took a lot of feedback from readers over the past few months since the first couple of chapters were posted. I tried to incorporate many of them into these three chapters that will be released. People wanted more detail on the characters, personalities, and just the world around them. I hope I can provide some of that in these next couple weeks.
Coming up this weekend, we have the second chapter of Teacher's Pet. I asked for feedback on this story too and a number of you have reached out to provide their thoughts. I want to thank everyone who messaged and gave me their opinions.
One of the main bits of feedback was the title sucks. It sets a tone of a teacher using a student, which this story is not. I'll try to have a new title up before the next chapter goes live. If you have any suggestions, please let me know.
The blurb outline also isn't very good, so I'll have to write a new one of those too. They are challenging to write when you don't want to spoil too much.
The last thing is the story might be too slow. Not a lot happens in the first chapter which is a year. The story does ramp up as time goes one. Chapter 2 is also a year, but after that it spreads out more. I wanted a more realistic, slowly building, relationship which probably makes for a boring read. I am sorry about that. I had some good suggestions to fix that in the future, so hopefully I don't turn you off from my stories in the future.
Anyway, thank you for reading this. If you have any constructive feedback or something you'd like to see from me, feel free to reach out. I try to respond when I can.
Thanks again,
-ghostwritten