I recently wrote a blog entry explaining the difficulties of doing the Tickets series.
Well, I asked myself a question. "How would the series be different if you were to write it from scratch today?"
Well, I'd get rid of the tickets. They were a maguffin to move the story forward. However, it weighted down the original story. I dealt with it a bit better in the second story, but found there were further questions unanswered that would take the emphasis from what I thought should be the main line of the story.
I'd keep some aspects of the story, though. The age of the main character was about sixteen, and that allowed me to show him being naive and show his discoveries
I'd like to know what people think. I'll be posting the start of the new story soon.
Peace!
JiMC