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I have an idea for a story. Problem is, I don't know if *I* should write it or if *you* want to read it.

In a nutshell - the topic/premise is blasphemous and heretical. It's bound to offend a good number of pious people.

The premise is as follows:

An Abbess is raped & in the midst of having an orgasm (during the act - her first ever) she has a vision.

In her vision Lucifer promises her pleasure like she has never dreamed of; she thinks to herself that what she's feeling now rivals the feeling of rapture; she then hears the voice of Jesus who says if she stays faithful to him she can have all of the orgasms that she desires in addition to the rapture. Lucifer counters that her church forbids that offer and if she was going to be a bad girl then it would be best with him. Jesus rebuts: as she is his bride, he - not the church - decides what is proper or not; if this is what I promise and what our Father will allow then it is true & proper...
after a bit more back & forth the Abbess takes her Lord's deal.

The vision ends with her climaxing w/praises to her Lord.

The follow up reveals that there's no free lunch; she is a new Job on a tightrope made up of sex & church dogma. Yes she can have sex - but it has to be in the service of saving souls and must not be for personal pleasure, even though the immediate reward is mind blowing orgasms.

She founds a new order to execute the mission of saving souls w/sex and has to run the gauntlet of church & secular politics, some of which is actually instigated by Lucifer.

In addition to mind blowing orgasms, the sisters in the order are 'blessed' w/three miracles (of science): regenerating virginity/hymen, immunity to sexual transmitted diseases, and supression of ovulation (no pregnancy or menstruation).

Although this premise implies the Catholic Church - it is not ment to be an indictment of that organization; any major dominant conservative religion will do.

There are ment to be echoes of Heinlein's 'Stranger in a Strange Land' and, obviously, the Bible's Book of Job.

So...
Should *I* (or anyone) write this?
Would *you* read this?

Please let me know what you think/feel.

~Ciao

 

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