I'm trying desperately to finish one of my half-written stories "Jason's Second Tale", and occasionally I go back to the original to make sure I don't introduce anything that doesn't match. Well, four years after I started posting JT and roughly five years after I started having assorted friends and competitors proofread it, I just noticed something.
In Chapter 6 of Jason's Tale, someone is killed in the shop where the protagonist lives for the next year or so. Apparently, no one ever notices the body just laying there. Does the body simply evaporate after a few minutes, like in the old "Warcraft" games?
I'm working on a revised version of JT, and it now has a couple of paragraphs about getting rid of Bill's body.
-ZM