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Lit comments are lit, Part 1

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I knew what I was getting into when I started posting in the Loving Wives section over on Literotica, but damn...It's a good thing that at a young age I learned how to take a punch. Thanks mom!

Some commenters took my statement that I would never delete comments as a "hold my beer" type challenge. Other commenters went a little further. To the Lit commenter who told me that he was going to rape my mother: well that's just ridiculous. Even if you could get past the guards and the warden at Mountain View Unit, Gatesville, you couldn't get past my mother's cell mate/life partner, Big Bernice. That crazy bitch would break you open like a shotgun and have you squealing like Ned Beatty in "Deliverance."

According to the comments, my story TGW was either too long or too short. I either know nothing about Texas or I have a deep understanding about Texas. I know nothing about the military while simultaneously have obviously spent a lot of time in the military. It's a good thing that at a young age I learned how to deal with stinging criticism, barbed comments and harsh invective. Thanks mom!

I have reached out for assistance with editing and beta reading, but I have not had any luck as of yet. One person that I reached out to about doing a beta reading of an upcoming story told me that they would rather drive roofing nails into their eyes than read any bullshit that I might write. Thanks mom!

 

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