Ok I've gotten some expectd pushback on my story. As I mentioned before,I started out to write a stroke story at worst or some hot erotica at best. And here I am at several thousand words along and despite many opporutnities, my hero hasn't gotten laid.In fact he's been careful to keep his hands to himself. As I wrote and rewrote this the same questions kept coming up. Here's a kid given the power to do whatever he wanted with women how does he handle it? He's flawed but basically a decent kid. Certainly not a rapist. And so far him having sex with these women would amount to rape. We all know how power corrupts is it going to corrupt him? How is it going to change him? To those of you who wanted to know where I'm going with this--that's where.