Despite delays at my end, WD40, my Volunteer Proofreader has persevered!
I got the list of suggested corrections, more than I hoped, but I believe that his contributions improve my story.
Any errors are my own! Nor do I apply every suggestion. Mostly because some issues are military specific. In an upcoming chapter I use the term Courts Martial, referencing multiple individuals being charged. Courts is the plural.
I can be too "inside baseball" so, a different perspective is beneficial.
Some other times I don't follow my proofreader's advice is when an error is pointed out, and I intended something significantly different. Proofreaders may not always intuit what the writer intend.
Identifying errors is beneficial.
Constructive Criticism from readers is still welcome. Neither WD40 nor I catch every mistake.
Chapter 24 should be up this weekend. I should be getting chapter 25 back from proofreading, and sending Chapter 26 for review.
In the meantime I continue to write ahead.