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Yes, the story has no resolution. That's because frankly I cannot see a resolution. Was there cheating? Yes, but it was part of the job. Does it matter? Of course. Does it matter to HER? Can a person who turns her tween child into a cold-blooded killer even know what love is? Doubtful. What happens with the newly-orphaned child? Can Jake climb out of the deep well of despair he's trapped now? So many questions, and no idea how to address them.

So, it's a dud. I wanted to remove the story as soon as I saw it published, but there is no removal option in the Authors dashboard.

 

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