Thanks by the feedback, everybody. I've been told the story is going too slow, that there is not enough sex.
Well, yes to both. It's going slow because the characters have too many things to say. And there is not enough sex scenes because, although it's an incest story, sex is not the focus. There will be some sex scenes, but only to advance the story.
BTW, I will wait to post the third story until one of the current two is finished.