I have been delayed by technical issues. Proof reading is ongoing. I got back chapters 19 and 20, I should be getting back chapters 21 and 22 soon. However, I lost power where I post stories from (an office where I do volunteer work some 50 miles from my home).
Posted from my phone.
I plan to be back in the office mid-week to finish what was interrupted, as well as to repost corrected chapters and new chapter 22.
I appreciate some constructive criticism from several readers and some other authors. In addition to the contributions of my proofreader.
Meanwhile I am continuing to write new chapters, and edit before asking my proofreader to look them over.
I hope the better quality of writing makes up for the delays in posting.
Ultimately, if I decide to offer this on Bookapy, etc. This story will require editing to tighten it up.
I have the basic outline, and time-line, I try to be writing several weeks ahead, and finish editing 1 chapter a week. Unfortunately, other commitments have been interfering.
Posted from my phone.