This evening, I finally finished and posted "Okinawa: Revisited".
And no, it is not a sequel. Rather, it is a edited and revised version of the original 1996 story. Cleaned up, with more than a few editing changes as well as changes tonally and in some of the characters.
There is no reason to reread it if somebody had read the original, unless they want to. Most of the changes are minor. Adjusting some characters, moving some events around, and other things mostly.
But I am still leaving the original here, hence the new name. It is after all over 25 years old now (holy shit where did the time go), and in many ways it is a classic of that era in Internet Erotica. Back when I posted these on ASSTR, my GeoCities page, and on my IRC erotica server on Dalnet.
But I am much happier with the revised version. In some ways, the original just had not aged well.