Well, I finally finished the rewrite of "Country Boy - City Girl". And while once again there are no major changes, there are many more of them in Books II and III than there were in Book I. Including a scene that had somehow been lost when I originally posted it, which included Pete actually proposing to Linda. That has now been returned.
And I made it a bit more obvious that it does indeed connect to my "Okinawa" series. Also, as I was doing this I returned to making "Author's Notes", as I had more than a few ask me where they were on the last two books. That part is entirely optional, but it does explain some of the things I was thinking as I was writing, and sometimes describes the real world places and people I based these on.
And included will now be notes, saying exactly where and what chapters of "Valley Girl" should be written, if somebody wants to read both of them at the same time. That is about to get a rewrite next, but it is a much shorter story, so should take nowhere near as long.