I posted "First Pick-up" today and received several typo notifications from makimesser, stonewall37643,and CoullPert (who found three). while correcting them, I found that the last five or so paragraphs had never made in into the posted version.
So, it's all corrected and reposted, now with added ending!
Well, it will be up in the morning, but it has been re-submitted.