Due to being in a minor traffic accident in the snow, and some other issues, I focused on making some corrections to the already submitted chapters 1 & 2, as well as editing chapters 3 & 4 (3 to be submitted around Friday February 26th.
Based on some comments, I completely changed the 'Blurb' for the story. I already have the relevant part of the poem by Yeats at the very beginning of Chapter 1. As there is no way to insert a break in the blurb. It confused more than a few people, when I also used it as the beginning of my 'Blurb' too.
I hope the new Blurb, along with the (corrected) Story Codes provide potential readers a better idea of what I am writing, and help them determine if they may be interested in Reading it.
I would appreciate some replies to this Blog entry, if you would read the Blurb for my story Darkness Falls. Please tell me if it seems appropriate for the story, and raises your interest in possibly reading the story.
Of course I encourage people to read the whole story, but any Constructive ideas of how to improve the Blurb would be appreciated. Thank You.
Paladin; Have Gun - Will Travel