I am sorry that I rushed putting up Chapter 2 of Darkness Falls. There were more errors than I anticipated. When I read it I noted several and began making corrections, I had no internet connection for 72+ hours, and intended to post the updated chapter on the evening of January 31st.
However, logging in to SOL, I received feedback on some errors I have corrected on my Word Document, and others I had not. I am going home, will review again, and hope to post the revised chapter 2 by February 3rd.