I have been made aware of several problems with my writings by a couple of the readers and also an SOL editor. The editor offered his assistance and a sample using my work, I viewed his corrections and immediately accepted his offer to work with me to not only edit future work but also go back and review/change what has already been posted.
We will be reviewing these 2 stories and re-post them as soon as possible.
It is my hope that this addition to my work flow will provide a correct and more pleasant read. thank you for your patience.