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The Good Wife - Chapter Two Notes

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Greetings.

I'm posting chapter two. The working title for this chapter was "The Dark Place" and it came out a little different than I actually envisioned. I anticipated more sex and less...not sex. When I posted chapter one, I included the code for "sex toys" because I anticipated different events than what we have here. Oh well.

Anyway, working within a three-act construct, the story needed to go a bit darker and generate some conflict. So I won't say I'm unhappy with the maturation of my original idea, but I feel less charitable about the actual writing this go around.

The next chapter should be the final, although I might write a stand alone chapter "3.5" for the Halloween Contest. I haven't made up my mind.

Thank you.

edit: as usual, reading the posted version revealed some issues with grammar. I think I caught and fixed most of them. Apologies.

 

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