So, I finally got around to reposting chapters 1 -22, what I consider Book 1 of the Pool Girl with all the feedback I've gotten incorporated. I hope I didn't screw up any ordering and do something like post chapter 17 as 18. We shall see after the queue processes I guess.
In other good writing news I made a LOT of progress on the next chapter today. In fact, I'm trying to decide if the writing should end where it is at or continue. I will probably distract myself with another project and let it percolate in the back of my brain while I consider it.