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A repost of the story, plus a new chapter.

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Submitted Edits include:

-Chapter 1 got a huge overhaul
-Chapter 2 is entirely new
-Chapter 3 is actually the old chapter 2 and 3 combined with minor edits
-Chapter 11 is all new
-Chapter 12 is coming along nicely

The rest of the story got some variable amounts of TLC for consistency and clarification. There have also been huge improvements for any of you Grammar and Punctuation Nazi's out there. You can thank Grammarly for that, it's an awesome tool. If you aren't familiar with it you should check it out.

I think the whole thing is worth a re-read, but I may be biased about that. At a minimum I would recommend reading chapters 1 and 2, it includes some minor modern googling and a good deal of experimentation working with his powers by gambling in Vegas.

If you're not into re-reading, that's cool too. Chapter 11 continues where we left off after 10, and you don't need the other info if you don't want a new revision in your head.

If you like the changes I'd love to hear about it.

If you don't like them, fuck off (no, really I want to hear that too).

Thanks, and I hope you enjoy it.

-SM

 

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