One of the things that happens as one is educated to write, is whether to right in first person or third person. Well I was listening to a lecture from Malcolm Gladwell, who was saying that he rarely writes in first person. and a gave an example of a storyteller telling a story, will do so in third person, as in "he said" or "She looks". You only use first person when you are writing about yourself as in a biography.
This caused me to rethink how I write. I feel that I am a storyteller, and I will be revising all my stories Starting with Bob's Life.
In this regards I have posted an update to Esmeralda. I will also be changing all measurements to the metric systems as this is the measurement system for Space.