Well, for the last 2 months in between writing more chapters for Book II, I finally completed the re-edit of Book I.
There should be no major changes, so there is no need to go out and read it again. Primarily what I was correcting was my bad typos, some horrible syntax, and correcting some times when I blew it with names. A few minor characters got renamed, but nothing major in any way. Primarily done for clarity.
So hopefully those who complained my writing was unreadable will give it another try.