Whew,
That was more work than I expected. First off, if you aren't happy with having to re-read the chapters, you don't need to. There are no changes that will make just continuing the story with the next chapter difficult. The only thing that might be worth noting is that John and Kim had a second date inserted in front of the one you already read about. Everything ended right where you left off.
For those interested in the changes. Every chapter got a little TLC and saw some real improvement. I think chapter 1 is much better now, I made a lot of progress in improving the formatting and in making his ability much more clear and hopefully more understandable. Chapters 5 and 6 both saw significant changes, with 6 almost doubling in content.
A reader correctly pointed out that any winnings over $600 would have needed to go the the Lottery main office in the state he was in. That made complete sense to me, so instead of just cashing in the prize and going shopping on Saturday, now my lead characters had to wait until Monday to do that. I decided to give them a second date to solve the problem.
Overall I think if you enjoyed the story so far, you will find re-reading it worth doing.
Now back to our regularly scheduled programming.
-SM