I always like hearing feedback from readers. I've had quite a bit of email and some comments on my first story here, "Susan and Jason Naked In School".
First of all, this story is fiction and so is the name of the high school: James Lovell High School. AFAIK, no such school exists. I googled it and of course google knows everything. I did really name it after the famous astronaut. Look him up if you don't know who Captain Lovell is.
It seems some are put off by the length of the chapters. I've posted stories to other sites and feedback from there was "not long enough". You can't satisfy all of the people all the time.
Another person has contacted me about some typos. Sorry, I'm not perfect but I don't think I've ever read a story without typos or some grammar faux pas. I think I'm actually better than most in this regard, but you can disagree if you want.
There were those who thought I was not staying true to the NiS genre because of details like everyone on a team has to play nude. I don't recall this being a requirement although in some of the NiS stories I've read the whole team did go nude. But it doesn't seem to be mandatory.
In any case, I did read the writer's guide here, https://www.asstr.org/~NIS-Admin/program/WritersGuide.html. I'm pretty sure I'm staying true to the genre. Maybe some others should read it too.
I've had some suggestions, one of which I'm seriously considering: writing Emily's NiS story. There are more but I'm still mulling this over.
And then there's this: "Go to utube & type in: AGT Alan Silva. Watch the audition video that is 5:35 long. About the 4:44 mark is a good picture of him and his wife and kids. That image made me think of Jay and Susan. I did that and started learning about Alan Silva. It's a cool story so if anyone else wants to check him out, it may be worth your time.
I appreciate all feedback, even if it's negative. So thanks to all those who've left comments or have emailed me.
Cheers,
odco