I'm taking another pass over chapter 16 today and sending it to my proofer. It might be my longest chapter yet. As much as we try, we don't catch everything so I appreciate the feedback I get about passages that are awkward or unclear. At some point, I am going to do a big reupload of chapters to update the online version with all the fixes. I think it will be at the end of summer in the storyline which is probably just a few chapters away. I will have to figure out how to do sections. The next section will be Senior Year, part 1 (titles may change, that's just how I'm thinking of it) and while I only have a few barebone plans for what will happen there I do already know how it will end which will lead to Senior Year part 2. It will be a big shift in the lives of the three protagonists. My current plan is to end the story with Melissa's and Lavi's graduation.
I say the current plan because I reserve the right to change my mind and keep going if I want at that point though if I do I think I will change the title and start it as a new work. It won't be the Pool Girl anymore, too much will have changed. If it does end at graduation there will be an epilogue. I like to see in the future of stories as a reader, I like to know what happened long term so I'm going to provide that for my own.
As I go side stories have been popping up in my head. I'm not writing them as I fear it will be a distraction but what I may do is write them out after the main story is done. So, I'm taking notes as I go for those side stories. Anyway, I need to get back to reviewing and I hope everyone is having a good weekend and for those in the U.S. I hope you have a nice Memorial Day.