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Manny's Pills

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I decided to "clean up" Chapter Five a bit, so it will be reposted soon, I hope. While I'm generally given to the most salacious outcomes possible, sometimes it might paint the story or a co-author in this case into a corner. That can lead to writer's block and a slowdown of the overall plot development, which would be bad for the story. In this case, it was a fair critique that my go-to sort of high-speed sexualization of the tale simply took it too far from the characters themselves too soon. If given time enough, perhaps they could be "corrupted" a bit more, but not that quickly to the point of showering with siblings. Just a thought. What I might do, though, is put that as a version B or even a "dream sequence" or something like that where one of the characters has a rather intense dream about things of that sort...and leave it in some question just whose dream it is.

 

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