Chapter seven of the Pool Girl is done with my first effort on it. Tomorrow morning I will proof it and then send it to a better proofer and once he deems it acceptable will post it. I want to continue to thank people reading and those who have given me feedback.
I discovered the inclusion of one line in re-reading that was borrowed from Bissell's Call Girl Cheerleaders. I've decided to leave it in as what it is, affectionate homage. As I've written the story I've been pleasantly surprised at how something that started in my head as a "what if" variation on Call Girl Cheerleaders has become something very different. Richard and Melissa definitely have their own ideas about what is going to happen and don't seem to care what I think. One thing I myself wondered what would happen with became clear as they were talking this chapter.
Speaking of this chapter, it was originally much longer. I've taken a fair bit of material out which I think will work better in chapter 8, which will have a lot of sex in it. I'm looking forward to it. Sometimes I want my characters to shut up and screw but they are oddly insistent about being true to themselves. Go figure.
For those who have wanted a lot of Lavi, you get here in chapter 8. But first, let's get chapter 7 posted.