You know that short story "Ending This Mess"? Well, it's just a scene from a novel. Granted, the scene came first, but I was also supposed to write up a more detailed version of an outline that Frostfire wrote (as notes from a conference, more on that later), so the two sorta merged into a novel. A novel I had absolutely no intention of writing, but I had that scene and I had that commission, and the damn things kept growing...
Anyway, the novel has been sitting for a couple of years now. I'm not happy with it but it was supposed to establish a bunch of "Swarm Cycle" canon, so I have to publish it. Problem is, all of my usual proofreaders have already seen it. If I have added new mistakes messing with it, they won't catch them. They already know what's supposed to be there and they won't see the typos.
So, I need some new eyes to look over "Ending This Mess" before I post it. Please note that I would need an internet email address to send a file to.
-ZM