My apologies for taking so long with the update to chapter seven. Work has me busier than usual.
I'm trying something different with this chapter. SOL only allows one blank line between paragraphs. This makes it difficult to signal a scene change with an extra line. I'm limited to using either a single space or a "horizontal rule."
Note the "horizontal rule" looks like a line.
I chose to use the horizontal rule to indicate a change in point of view.
With chapter seven, I figured out how to insert a double horizontal rule. Now, a double horizontal rule indicates a POV change and a single one indicates scene shifts.
Please let me know if this is better or worse. I can change it back easily enough.