I will not claim to be a great wordsmith. I enjoy writing,I get laid for it, that's good enough. I read mostly classics these days like Proust or interesting stories like "Blowout" or "The Sparrow" - but sometimes I also just enjoy a good hot sex story.
Sometimes I see some really good writing. Like "The Binding Rings" or this new entry "Enter Veronica" - authors who write some hot scenes. Are they cliche? A bit. So is my writing - "guy finds a way to get sex". But those two tales I really enjoy the layout and care taken.
Now I'm gonna gripe cause I'm an older guy and I can. Some stories I see the categories and think "impregnation? Reluctance? Right up my alley!"
And then my dick wilts because the writing is so bad. Not to name names, but please - don't do this.
"Wow Jimmy your dick is so big!"
"I know Maggie I'm huge."
"I've been married ten years and didn't know a dick could get hard! I totally want to have your baby now!"
"Wow you want to have my baby that's so cool let's sex!"
"Gee willickers sex is so good I want to nut right now!"
If your characters act like their brains are leaking into their shoes, try again. Please, kids. Don't ruin she with bad writing.