After reading erotica for decades starting to write it is every bit as difficult as I thought it would be. If anything the feedback to my first chapter is better than it probably merits. It has no sex which I assumed would generate disdain. Some of the feedback regards proofing and I found that although I had re-read and reviewed the chapter many times it had been for content and I hadn't had a critical enough eye for spelling and some sentence flows. I've reviewed it again and hopefully with a better eye to these things and re-uploaded it. I have chapters two and three done. Oddly, its' the sex I'm worried about writing well. I feel like I know the characters and know them, describing their actions is what worries me. Right now I have no idea how long the series will last but look forward to following it to it's conclusion.