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Posting Revised Chapters for The Eighth Warden, Book 1

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I've started posting updated and revised chapters for The Eighth Warden Book 1. So far, I've updated Chapters 1 to 10.

The changes I've made are primarily to improve the flow and to clean up some awkward wording. There were also a few typos and a couple of very minor inconsistencies that I wanted to fix. And I changed Corec's equipment slightly. He now has a long knife for situations where a greatsword would be too awkward, and I clarified that his scabbard is detachable (it's not possible to draw a greatsword from a scabbard that's attached to your back or waist--your arms aren't long enough).

--Ivy

 

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