Ive had a multitude of people say that my chapters are too short. I agree. So thats why, instead of just keep barging on, I'm going to merge ALL chapters into one, and start a new story instead of the current one. It'll be the same story, just longer, not short bursts of content. I've also had an offer for a proofreader/editor, and i have taken that up. You know who you are, if you have Google Drive/ Google Docs, ive already shared the folder with you. Thanks
-Rebel