Forgive me everyone, Im still trying to figure out the proper formatting for this site. Im attempting to follow the guidelines for submissions, but the italics, spacing, indenting, etc are just not coming through right yet.
For example, the first four sentences in Chapter 4 of Crossing the Line were supposed to be both italicised and indented in an effort to provide a background for the beginning of the chapter, alas they came through as just normal sentences.
Regarding the ending of chapter 4, I essentially had an entire 24 hours to set the scenes for Alex and Sam having all kinds of sex and experimentations, but ended it mid-morning in a way that left the remainder of the day open to the readers imagination. The main reason for this was the length of the chapter. I could have easily written another 20 pages exploring the remainder of christmas day with them.
Now this is a two-edged sword as far as I'm seeing it. On the one hand, the reader gets to continue the fantasy where I left off, filling in the gaps as they so desire for Sam and Alex to have done anything their minds eye could dream up. On the other hand, its also closing the door on the readers experiencing Sams first full blown orgasm from true intercourse with her brother. Yes, oral is all well and good, but their story is more built around their emotional connection as friends and soulmates rather than the plain lust that so often times shrouds stories like this.
To skirt this issue, I will likely do similar flash-backs like I did in chapter two going back to their first sexual encounter in chapter 1. I hope this is not seen as a cheap writers trick, but I was pretty much out of options.