Hi Guys,
Just needed to give you an update. I have had a pretty bad summer with ill health and recovery. I also factored in some Holiday time as well. During this time my better half gave me a temporary ban from all my electronic devices to make sure I was able to recover fully.
What this did do is give me a chance to re-read the story from the start and well... Oh Boy!
I knew from the outset that I wouldn't be able to write to the calibre of G. Younger or Nick Scipio. The blatant mistakes I have made are quite embarrassing.
The Character development at times has been a bit lacking, The spelling and grammar mistakes at times are too obvious but in general, for a first-timer, it's not too bad.
We are just a few chapters away from completing the first book, at that point things will be changing. The biggest and most obvious mistake you make when writing a story like this is thinking you can do it on your own. I will be making sure to get an editor and proofreaders in place before I even contemplate releasing any of Book 2. That also brings me to my next mistake, which was releasing chapters on the fly. I am going to be making sure that the whole book is complete before I start releasing anything.
All this being said, I will continue as I have been to get the rest of book one completed. The release of the next chapter isn't far away.
I thank you for your continued support.