Hello to my readers!
I was away at my cottage, in the far north, for the past two months. There is no cell phone nor internet coverage up where that is. I didn't intend to stay that long, but the peacefulness of it all seduced me into chilling out for far longer then I had planned for. While I was there, I rewrote all 33 chapters that I had written for my story thus far. I had purchased a couple of creative writing books in the interest of becoming a better writer, and I learned some of the basics. As I've pointed out before, this is my first sojourn into the wonderful field of Authorship.
When I went back to reread my work, I found thousands of punctuation and grammatical errors. I had many run-on sentences and sometimes even very confusing sentences. Sentences that would necessitate someone needing to reread a particular paragraph to make sense of what I was trying to say. I cleaned those up and tried to make the story flow in a more pleasing way. I added scene breaks as well because, to be honest, I didn't know how to insert them until just recently.
Almost every chapter had some added text as well. Nothing plot changing, so it is not necessary to read it again if you are disinclined. I would recommend it though because I think that the corrections I made are significant enough to allow for a more enjoyable read.
Rest assured that I am currently writing out the next few chapters and the corrected ones are being posted as fast as the site allows. I hope that my current readers continue to enjoy my story and that whoever decides to reread it from the beginning has an enjoyable time doing so. To any new readers, I hope you enjoy my efforts as well.
Cheers!
Chris