I am currently working on Chapter 27; if you haven't liked the past two chapters, please let me know. I'm still trying to work my own mind around the change in Johnny's circumstances, and figuring out where to go with it.
I am going on a vacation for the next few days; this vacation involves a couple of overnight trains (Yes, I really do ride overnight trains when traveling!) which might means if I can find a comfortable place to work on my story onboard, I may still be working for some of the vacation. But I am not going to work on it during my hard-earned time at a beach resort, so it will be dropped off a bit- and if I can't get comfortable working on the train, it won't happen there, either.
Things are continuing, and I hope you will like the next chapter. I am not sure that "vacation" chapters really are something you people are looking for. Please give me your opinion on that, I'd really appreciate it.