The major rewrites of all the chapters are done and have been done since I posted chapter 16 and 17. Chapter 18 is about halfway done; I hope to finish it this weekend. I have decided on a potential strategy for going forward from the end of the first verse; thats why there is a section title on it now.
I am about to repost chapters 1-12. If you have read the story already there is no reason to go over it. It is just a grammatical and punctuation update from my editor. I have a bit of interest in finding a different editor; my current editor is awesome- which is why I married her- but I would like someone who is willing to discuss my creative process, and the nature of my writing with me.
I am surprised at the lack of comments I have been getting. I don't bite, I promise. I might even answer questions. Feel free to tell me what you think.