The wonderful jetson63 has returned chapters 5 and 6, while giving me the requisite smack upside the head for some of my literary and stylistic choices. As promised, both chapters have been added to the queue.
The writing, rewriting, and editing of these two chapters (to say nothing of letting my mind drift as I laid on the couch watching mindless daytime television while recuperating from whatever bug I picked up last week) gave rise to a little voice in my head wondering whether I might need a reality check in terms of the way I wrote Lisa's actions and reactions in these chapters.
As such, I am looking to add a female voice on my editorial team, to provide some balance to both sides of this literary relationship. If you are interested, please send me a message.
And, to all my readers, thank you for continuing to read and thank you for your kind words of encouragement and support. I wish you all a safe and happy holiday week.