Chapter 16 has been submitted to the moderators and should post soon.
My thanks to CoullPert for pursuing those damn non-possessive possessive apostrophes! One of the these days I'll get em right - until then I hope CoullPert continues to report them.
I think I'm caught up on the emails - if you haven't gotten a response then my apologies and sincere thanks for taking the time to let me know your thoughts on the story.
Have a safe and happy weekend!