>My hope is that while you use a lot of creative bondage in this story I would like to see much more whipping.
On using "a lot of creative bondage and much more whipping" in stories that have slavegirls and ponygirls, I'm not sure if I should do that. It might break the willing suspension of disbelief of many of my readers, therefore causing them to cease to be immersed in the story.
Also I have been thinking of writing out all of the sex scenes and replace them with just a chaste kiss and the scene demurely fades to black when the couple makes their way to the bedroom. I think my readers will appreciate that more.
Mua! ha! ha!