I am going to take a break on "Indentured: a New Beginning" after Chapter 27 is posted.
I was asked to post some chapters of "Taking Ownership of Belinda" that has pony girls on ranches. It is in the same world as "Indentured: a New Beginning", but further in the future.
This future is even more darker and depraved. It is more Dolcett and less Erenisch.
In the meantime, any feedback on what readers liked in "Indentured: a New Beginning" and what they would like to see in future chapters when I get back to writing it would be appreciated.